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發表於 14-7-2013 00:32:24 | 顯示全部樓層
Titanic, the ship of dreams
a ship to be marvelled and seen
to sail upon her unsinkable structure
one couldn't possibly think of such adventure

The Captain brought her to the sea
locked the telescope in the box but lost the key
began with luxuries but ended with sadness
a tragedy to live in and to be witnessed

Titanic, the ship of dreams
if not for the iceberg, what would you be today
nothing be a memory slowly fading away
left to be forgotten at the bottom of the grave
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沙發
發表於 14-7-2013 12:30:30 | 顯示全部樓層
本帖最後由 david 於 14-7-2013 12:58 編輯
ftsa004 發表於 14-7-2013 06:29
Hi, David, your English prom seems better then the Chinese one. keep up the good work.


梗係英文易作過中文啦, 中文要對齊字數, 英文就唔駛.
我之前都寫過六,七首, ftsa004 兄可上去看看, 指教指教.
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板凳
發表於 14-7-2013 12:33:41 | 顯示全部樓層
康爸幾時四儍嚟竹戰四方呀 ? 打手板都得架
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